Nice. I really enjoyed the internal rhyme in the second stanza. Oh man, I keep going back over it. The assonance is great too!
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Nice. I really enjoyed the internal rhyme in the second stanza. Oh man, I keep going back over it. The assonance is great too!
Thank you so much! This piece simply flowed out of me. Sometimes inspirations takes the best of me!