Lovely piece. Nice use of metaphors. I felt the piece was a bit too condensed (referring to your text alignment) and I spotted a few errors unless of course they were intentional.
Except for those, I enjoyed the read. Looking forward to more from you
Thanks for the reading and comment, @skodie. It must be the layout of the images. I'll see what I can do. Thanks for the warning.
Aye aye. We're almost at the finish line. Finish hard