First off, lovely poem! I love the very last lines "While I sink, I have no fear
My sense awakens..."
It is relatable! I feel at home in the water, sinking deeper and feeling the cooling awakening effect. The same goes for love, I suppose.
Secondly, thanks for the link to the steemit school!
Good point about love.. I didn't think about that, but I agree.. It's same, the more deeper we go the more it seems colder, but as our senses awaken we realize that we were cold :)
Thanks for stopping by and see you on our class in Steemit School ;)