adrift / #Poem

in #poetry6 years ago

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written, adrift on the river, amidst the solitude of the #sunderban #rainforests.


keora leaves fall quietly on the
tired river that
moves steadily towards the
awaiting sea
one cannot be
aware of activity
at all times.
& at all times
tigers roam the
islands of the sunderbans
& at all times
i was not aware.
& all that was received was
a silent feeling of
being watched through
the darker trees
by two luminous
effervescing eyes.

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It really captures the quiet of nature but also the wilderness of nature very well <3

Thank you so much, compadre, for all your comments and critiques. These are the little things that make one want to keep on creating, instead of fading into stagnation and blocks again. You are a very awesome person and I'm grateful AF. Thank you. <3

❤❤❤

I hate the thought when talented people think that no one gives a fudge about their creations, so no need to thank me ❤

Just keep creating ❤❤❤