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RE: Listen

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Listen! You had better be vigilant
Look! You had better be watchful
Caution! You had better watch your path
Silence! You could be the next victim

This has to be my favorite part. I was tensed and I was really anticipating what was coming next. I have not gotten this feeling in a long while. Thank you for bringing it again @illuminatus.