Your poetry is good, especially as you choose to refer to life as she. But I disagree with you that life is helpless. Life is actually in control, moving in the direction she has chosen. It's left to us to follow it in harmony or suffer the consequences of rebellion or ignorance. Life should not be pitied; man should be pitied.
Good attempt. Keep improving.
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The message in this poem is that Human transform life and we have the choice and power to make life what we Want and not just surrender to fate
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