Fruit of yearning in the vastness:
Melancholy, amber light.
Song of the remembrance of warmth—
Melancholy, crimson speech.
Heart of the agony of incarnation:
Melancholy, black tears.
Luminous booklet and affection's fade—
Melancholy, love transparent.
Nectar of lost purity, sad infinite facade.
This very part just exploded my imagination!Such epithets, metaphors, they all together create an absolutely unique image in the head, and the feeling you were describing got new tones and colors. After your poem melancholy isn't just a simple definition of person's mood but something very deep and multifaceted.
As a creative person do you often feel melancholy?