I don't usually like rhyming poems because writers generally try to insert a bunch of big words they found in the thesaurus to try and appear deep and profound-- but you used simple language, and the sentiment was nice and to the point. anyway good job. i wish i still had my harmonica
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I think that using big words makes the poem lose it's soul, much like todays digital music.. thanks for your comment I appreciate it very much :) get one A.S.A.P hehe