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RE: Beautiful Night

in #poetry7 years ago

Your tender whispers smooch my ears

Smooch? For real? That word doesn't fit at all, mate. Great effort and theme. Keep trying on the wording. Some are poetic, others are erotic, and others just don't fit.

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Thanks. Some things just come spontaneously. And not understanding the concepts behind some of the lines could make them look not fitting at all ☺.

Thanks all the same mate 😁ni

Fair enough. It's just the sound a smooch makes, especially if it's on your ear, tends to be annoying more than pleasurable.

Lol. 😂 .. Now I get you...