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RE: POEM | BURNOUT

in #poetry7 years ago

Enjoyed the poem good sir!
Seeing as I'm quite poor at explication, take this instead!

With a blank and listless look, he gradually opens the book
What shock! What surprise! He's slow to realize,
He's already dead inside
His desires nullified...

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Thank you for dropping by. I think what you've written is awesome. You must be good at writing poems. ^^

Just a huge book-nerd that started trying to throw words together! :)
Cheers!