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RE: III — Mausoleum of Ghosts

in #poetry7 years ago

A pleasure to read!
It seems a lot of the time when people try to cram as much advanced diction into a work such as this, they end up floundering their way to the end.
But this was expertly done and flowed well in my head.
Thank you for your words!

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Thanks so much :)
It takes a firm grasp of the metaphor for the image you express to do so