Very much enjoyed your poem!
Didn't know what to say so I made Haiku versions of your stanzas for fun!
Memories fading
At peace within the shadow
The final sharp death
Sacrificed so much
Those worldly riches denied
For that unknown shore
Petty words remain
No love, family, or friends
A grief-less passing
Those exquisite pains
Lifes loves and destiny's path
Driven by their Sins