This young rabbit
He traveled all day
He ran and ran
Trying to find his way
A little grass here
A little grass there
But about the grass
He didn't much care
He was searching for something
He didn't much know
But nothing was going
To stop him no
Determined little rabbit
That he was
Running so much
Wearing his paws
He stopped to think
What could it be
Something he wanted
So desperately
He thought and thought
And thought some more
He was so tired
Exhausted and wore
He saw a man
From a distance
This was his chance
He would not miss it
The man opened his arms
And welcomed him in
All the rabbit wanted
Was a best friend
I'm brand new to writing poems and criticism will be greatly appreciated. I wrote this poem and felt so great about myself. All comments, good or bad, are welcomed! Thank you much for reading.
Nice brodi!!! Well put together!
Thanks homie! Such a passion of mine!!