This was a comment entry to @mehdibca's contest. It didn't win, but I like it enough to share with you all. It was suggested that it might work well as a song, so I'm shouting out to #art-services here as well. If there's a musician that want to collaborate or use these as lyrics, let's chat about it!
Love is undefinable
By words or thoughts alone
For love transcends the mind
And sinks deeper than our bones
If you've ever seen the sunrise
With your lover at your side
Or ever held the hand
Of your parent, as they died
If you've ever cried alone
In the darkness of your room
Or held your breath in awe
To see a great big harvest moon
If you've ever smiled at a stranger
Or walked away in shame
Then love has been inside you
Though it might have felt like pain
Love is not just warm and fuzzy
Nor is it the opposite of hate
And it isn't just for those
Who have been somehow blessed by fate
Love is the in-breath and the out
And every moment in between
And especially that space
Where waking meets the dream
Love is why we hope
Love is why we pray
And I promise every one of you
Knows love in your own way
Thanks for visiting!
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This was so lovely, Uni! <3 <3 <3
"Then love has been inside you
Though it might have felt like pain"
I'll be carrying that one with me in times of hardship.
Aww, thanks stitchy. :) <3
good work .....upvoted!
Thank you!
Beautiful!
Much Love Waves :)
Aww, thanks soundwaves! <3
Excellent poetry entry. Thanks for posting this.
Thank YOU for your kind words!
Love this <3
Thank you, kindly. <3
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Awesome; thank you!
The second verse is chilling!
Aw, I can see that. Thank you!
Well written! Beautiful composition!
Thank you!
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So beautiful
Thank you Isaria! <3
This is beautiful I read it singing in my head!
Yay! I hope you sing it for real as well! And I hope it's recorded so I can listen!
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Uni, you have a soft and delicate voice. It's like a heartfelt whisper along a long and dusty road... like a caress of sunshine against the blossoms.
Thank you dbz! That's so sweet and poetic of you to say! :D
I have the logical mind of a programmer and the soul of a poet. I'm like Sheldon Cooper meets the Dark side of Menopause.
Haha, that's great!
Beautiful ... We all know love in our own ways :D
Another rocket Uni, look forward to hearing you on the radio again :)
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Thanks @diggerdugg! And thanks for the @muxxybot nomination!! I don't really know how it works, but I accept!? :D
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I got it!! Thank you so much for nominating me! <3 <3
This one made the tears well up. Wonderful, wonderful poem. Resteemed ❤❤❤❤
Thank you wandrn! <3
My pleasure!
ohhhhh very beautiful
Thank you!
XD