Nicely done indeed! Language sure is a magnificent thing. Even though you used words instead of syllables, it still ends up as a senryu with correct numbers of syllables after being translated to english!
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Thanks :D I only figured out after I posted that even in Dutch it is correct, all words are just one syllable... And it came to me just like that! I think reading your posts must have put the rules in my head and that went to work with it in the background.
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