Bear with me, I am not much of a poet but I am taking my best crack at it based on what I have experienced in my life and the vague way here I describe finding and falling for my wife @bloghound .
(Written by me a few years ago)
Preachin bout things that preachers dont preach.
Teachin bout things that teachers dont teach.
Openin my mouth and sharing my mind,
Exposing my thoughts that others cant find.
Wandering the world always feeling not found,
Screamin so loud yet not making a sound.
Is this just me? Or is it just you?
If we share the same thoughts, does that make them true?
We crossed the same path, now one equals two.
I thought its just me, but then i found you.
I thought that my past, my walk down wrong paths,
Would imprison me to an aloneness that lasts.
We started to talk, I started to preach.
You preached to me, you started to teach.
We thought the same, both been through the game.
I married you and gave you my name.
(Photo: my wife and I)
@vegasgambler 2018. All Rights Reserved.
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Thank you!
I think that's quite good actually
Thank you @bobbylee !
Now that is a really good poem!!
Awesome my friend!! Resteemed!!
You got a great gal there - Jerryl is a gem!!
Wow. Thank you, my friend @paradise-found !
soo cute
Thank you!
Awee.. <3 So sweet <3 :)
Thank you @creyestxsa94 !
Not quite Robert Frost, but it's from the heart, makes sense, rhymes, and has some power in it.
Well done.
Thank you @mepatriot !
You're very welcome. I am a poet also.. If you really enjoy it, take a poetry class or two at your local Community College...
I appreciate it, my friend!
this is greeeeat dude!
Greetings
Thank you @marqu3zctrl !
Probably one of the sweetest words I've read up til now. :)
Thank you so much @keiitycat !
"kilig" to the bones sissy o @bloghound....hehe!
Lovely sweet poetry comes from the heart of a man truly inlove....😊
Thank you very much @sweetcha !
beautiful piece. You gave it your best shot.
Thank you @papamimd !
Good Good Good!!!! Don't care for others. You write with your soul and it be excellent
Thank you!
How sweet. Very hopeless romantic poem.
I love the rhyme and I love the message more.
Thank you @dunkman !
This is a lovely piece, You captured your journey with love very deeply.
Thank you, brutha!
A rare, epic and commendable achievement when a tough guy such as yourself opens his heart, testifies his love for his woman @bloghound and exposes his vulnerability. Well done! @vegasgambler
Thank you very much, @ninahaskin !
It started confused but ended complete. Nicely done!
Like what? Give 11 examples lol!
LOL Arief!
Thank you!
I smell love in the air here. Nice poem sir. ;)
Thank you @puroypoi !
I like it. You did an amazing job @vegasgambler
Thank you @joalvarez !
Ayay! So sweet! ❤
Thank you @arrlinn !
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Too kind of you @paradise-found .
Big thanks, my friend!
I think it's a beautiful and sweet poem, written from the heart. God bless you both!😀
Thank you @jap60 !
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Thank you.
sweet as honey:)
God bless your family always.
Stay blessed.
have a lovely day!
Thank you @sunnylife !
That is an absolutely beautiful poem! May god bless you more each day. Regards to everyone.
Thank you very much @sherylneil !
So sweet of you sir... I will introduce you to my husband teach him please... Lols
Lol, Thank you @avhyaceulip !
I 100 percent relate! Great rhyme and truth loved it. Don't take a class at your local college. They are not experts on everything. What we decide is what is acceptable not them.
Thank you @iamstan !
Sweet! .. Wish you all the best guys! @bloghound and @vegasgambler
Thank you @iamdeth