Still clear his voice ... laughing his laughter ....
Even the occasional cries ...
Remembering time to feed him ... lead him ... also comfort him ....
Now...
Now it's gone .. time together ...
That's where I hope it will happen again
Here is the picture of a child's duty ...
But...
But unfortunately the time is so fast ...
As the heart begins to be peaceful, peaceful, and happy
He has been called ...
)
awww what a lovley poem thank you
With love,
harj : ) xoxo
Abstract artist
(My latest artwork is "Government")
Good lines, very good...
Verse1,
I see a person who derives joy in her responsibilities to someone and not sadness due to usage of words that depict sweet memory.
Verse 2,
Seems to have told us the end in unceremonious fashion leaving us to wonder what happened. It also tells us that the author was addressing a child in verse 1.
Verse 3,
Makes this poem bend towards tragedy as the person who is being made reference to might have died.