I absolutely love this poem. These thoughts are so genuine and it really speaks right to me. I love writing like this!!! Very well done, I am so inspired to sit down and write some more right now for THIS is the way I actually love to write!!!
You are by the way mentioned in the Hunt Curation #9 by @poetsunited - an article made to find great poets and poetry - and you are indeed one of those! If you'd like you are welcome to read it:
https://steemit.com/poetsunited/@vuds/steemit-poets-united-the-hunt-curation-9
There, you'll also find link to join our Discord server and to really get into this wonderful community - you are very welcome!!!