What if your burdens
Could be blown away?
A soft puff of air,
Gone
Off with dispair?
Carried by winds
Drift here and soar there
Landing on trees
Rivers
Planes skimming air...
Once they have left you
You've nary a care
Your heart spreading wide
What if your troubles
We're gone in a moment
Who would you call
Would even you dare?
If burdens could go
To East or to West,
Where would you send them
Having never been yet?
I carry a basket, a glass
And a pen,
And puff at the burdens
This well never ends.
Janelle Gregory
Logo courtesy of @KingLeon47
you have such a beautiful way with words
Thank you @tattoodjay 💕 as you do with light ❤
:)
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That is wonderful poem you made and i like its meaning because its saying great things like we always cary burden but aw have to try to clear all as we take them any place its always create problem for us. I like editing of your photo With Tiger and its look so nice.
Thank you, @birjudanak. I appreciate your insight and it's not the photo I was looking for that actually inspired me to write it, but glad you like the edit!
Hi Janelle,
Your poetry is really good!
Thanks for sharing it!
Thank you @phrase I am so happy you enjoy!
Lost myself in your writing, can't wait for the next one!
I'm so happy you like them. It's so freeing to write them. ❤
Great poem with vivid imagery. I'd feel like this if I could take a deep breath and blow my burdens away
Thank you for the awesome comment lol I am with you there!
Nicely penned...
I would probably not let
My burdens go astray.
They are mine, as I am theirs,
It will stay this way!
Ahh very well written! I'm following and I so appreciate the poetry response!
Wow..very nice post
Thank you 💕