The Island, Episode 2 - an interactive rhyming adventure

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

The island is a rhyming adventure, where YOU choose what happens next! Simply read the episode, and then post what you think should come next as a comment. Make sure it rhymes with the last line. And make sure to vote on the suggestion you like most - the one with most votes will become part of the story. Catch up on previous episodes by visiting #TheIsland

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Previously
You'll die for sure if you stay here...
So check the wreck in search of gear

Episode 2
You sit up straight, slowly stand
Then walk across the red hot sand
The ship is broken, on its side
Its bow is smashed, and open wide

A rope is hanging from the deck
It's tied around a dead-man's neck
A chest is floating out to sea...

Write your final line suggestion in the comments, and then vote for your favourite suggestion. You might want to check back in for new suggestions later - especially if you're the first to post! But beware... the story moves on every 24 hours. The comment with most votes will decide where the story goes next

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You ponder what it's contents be.

You're leading the charge so far... not long left

You take the corpse's rope and flee

To retrieve it you swim as do manatee