Poem / Just Once

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Just Once

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Just once I need you to say
Just once I need you to stay
Just once I need to see
All the things you see in me

Just once I want to hear
Just once whisper in my ear
Just once confess your love
So that I can be set free like a white dove

Just once tell me I'm right
Just once stay in sight
Just once follow me
I'll reach success you'll see

Just once let it out
Just once give it a shout
Just once show some emotion
You are my life's biggest motion

Just once show me what you need
Just once I'll be what you need me to be
Just once I'll smile
And show you life's an upward spiral

By Ethan
2017/08/22

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A very lovely poem. I like the sense it gives to the reader that just once you want to be appreciated, to be missed, to be special. I really liked it Ethan. I think many people can relate to your poem. Keep writing. I love it! :D

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Will do bud :D

thanks master...

I relate to almost everything you write! Awesome piece ❤

beautyful poem.i like this.

Very beautiful, best wishes

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Really nice poem.

Glad I stopped by again ! Supportive of your sweet words!!! <3

Wow! I enjoyed it much not just once.

Nice poem Athan

well, that's life... once in a lifetime we have this chance... it can't be many... maybe just once...

What a touching poem :(
I felt that. And as human, it's reasonable if we want someone to be afraid of losing us. When we love someone, we want someone loves us back. Because, loving is not alone. But, both of us loving together.

Very true bud. Love isn't a one way thing... and when it is it is toxic :|

I like the way you answered :)