Just You, Me and Reality pt 3
A new feeling is starting to arise
I am anticipating her surprise
It's been 5 days
She's infecting me with her ways
I still stand there everyday
I get a glimpse of her on her way
She flies by as fast as she can
I feel like stopping her but here I just stand...
Hello there
Aren't you going to the town fair?
not this year.
I have more important things to declare
Get it done and over with
I thought for a while
Every day I would stop for a minute to observe
And watch as you frown over what you deserved
So you're a stalker now?
I should find another place to express my sorrow
Don't change the subject
My point I still need to inflict
Fine
I found this in my basement
A white chord?
Do you plan to cut my life short?
Be quiet a second
Let me finish my explaining she beckoned
I looked at her for a minute
A smile stretched across her face
As I nodded
Again she gave me another warm embrace.
She was one of the biggest mysteries to me
Why wouldn't she just leave me to my loneliness be
This chord is a lot like everything
It has a beginning and an end
The length all depends
On if you tie knots to shorten the length
You aren't very good at this are you?
Stop criticizing I'm trying my best
Start with your test
Before explaining all the rest
You are so obnoxious
I take that as a compliment your highness
I'm going to leave this here
I'm done with your gloomy despair
She turned to walk away from me
She was pretty angry
I stopped her in her tracks
She was startled and took a few steps back
I grabbed her by the arm
Her face lit up with alarm
Come with me
You wasted your time to try to instill within me some glee
Now I am repaying you
I hope you have on some running shoes
I refuse
I don't know where you want to take me
Stop your complaining
We are going some place entertaining
You said you weren't going to the fair.
Here's a rubber band for your hair
Let's get going
I want to get there before the fireworks start blowing
She wasn't able to resist my impulsive decisions
She just followed me without any further questions
By Ethan
2017/08/29
Buena elección de imágenes contrastan muy bien con la parte final del poema
wow you done it again master..kindly see my poem toh and upvoted it..https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/blupost-poetry-our-love-story
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nice story , and i like post like this
Nice post athan
very well done. good writing with nice illustration. i would like to see more! :-)
Good post. im a lover of poems.
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Nice piece Ethan
Nice poetry @xxsenpaixsamaxx
very touching. nice post, keep it up !
see and read my poems too @daiiat thanks.
I loved it Ethan! What a profound poem with a real message. Sometimes someone can get so self absorbed in their loneliness and depression that they need someone to make him get angry. It is a really great series of poems! :D
Face it and fight it don't be a coward!
Best luck for them and for the author!
Amazing as ever. ^^
I really enjoyed
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