Needed for Success
When should I give up
Dreams are always achievable
With prayer and good luck
With hard work and intense labor
My life will earn heavenly favor
Striving to do the best I can
Trying to be the better man
Every step is thought out
Only deviating when emergency shouts
To be successful is my number one dream
I can only make it if my heart and mind are a team
Getting rid of distraction
Getting rid of temporal satisfaction
I need to end bad habits
To focus on my educational status
One day I will provide
A satisfactory life
For my children
My family, my wife
Focus on whats right
Success will be in sight
By Ethan
2017/06/11
A lot of truths in your poem. Success is within your grasp only if you work for it.
I also write poems. Check out my poem to my autistic son.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@positivesteem/if-i-am-a-superhero-a-poem-dedicated-to-my-autistic-son
I always do, I enjoy your poems, they have so much meaning behind them :)
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Will do! Thnaks for the vote ;)
"Focus on whats right
Success will be in sight" - Amazing!
Love the poem and the image as well!
Keep your posts coming! Please check out mine as well. Thank you.
Thank you, I'll check it out