Poem / Stay - Leave

[xxsenpaixsamaxx]

Stay - Leave

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Stay...
Don't walk away
Look me in the eye
Tell me my favorite four letter lie
Stay...
By my side another day
Even if you have a lot to hide
Let me enjoy my pride
Stay...
I know there's something wrong
I saw you the other day with 'John"
I decided to look away
Stay...
I'm not sure what to say
I'm confused by how things have turned out
I've seen you gazing into the distance with that pout

Leave...
I've seen enough
I know you're not pleased
I don't want to call my own bluff
Leave...
I'm begging you please
Just say goodbye
There's to many painful memories, I feel I may die
Leave...
I knew it when I saw it
There was a new light lit
I'm only just starting to grieve
Leave...
There's nothing more I want to say
There's nothing more I want to see
Just turn around and walk your 'new way'

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By Ethan
2017/10/02

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Comments

[sakshi1524]

aww.. that depicts a true state of mind one goes through sometimes..

[yazendahabreh]

It the most beautiful thing I read of poem

[hugobohor]

Good poem friend @xxsenpaixsamaxx. Congratulations on your post. It is always difficult to finish, to say goodbye.

[bleedpoet]

Beautiful contrast poem, knowing when it's over can be the most challenging experience for the soul.

[spiritualmatters]

most challenging experience for the soul

...yet, so freeing!

There's nothing better than living the truth when you're single.

Now, if you're married...that's a whole other story...

Peace.

[bleedpoet]

There's an old song called 'Jingle Jangle Jingle' I used to listen to after a breakup, helps put things in perspective.

[spiritualmatters]

;+)...and you'd go ridin' merrily along?...

[suikka]

always of the fantastic poem resteem and upvote ,bravo

[ufxpression]

Amazing piece... This came outright from your Heart, sustaining relationships could be very difficult your poem just said it all

[beltashazzar]

Wonderfully touching poem. Thank you for sharing it @xxsenpaixsamaxx ! I would like to follow you and I look forward to seeing more good work.

I'd be happy to discuss writing and poetry together as well!

[crypto570]

Great write, I really like your style. Will be following you. Great things can spawn from dark times. Keep it up.

[blessedman939]

Wow! I love this.I do write poems once in a while. Keep it up!

[diantbi]

how you can succeed with your poems, always get upvote from @gavvet and @timsaid ,, i like your poem, in steemit just two famous in tag poetry, you and @honeybee

[africanpen]

Emotional shades. What every human has to deal with at some point in their lives. Exquisite wording :)

[cabbagepatch]

Ethan, you have the power of expression and inner feelings. That makes you special and unique. That is why I like who you are. Keep striving and you will make it to the top. Loved you poem! Have a wonderful week ahead. :D

[anneke]

This is beautiful and I am sure a lot of people can relate to this. Torn between things and people. Resteem

[ciruls]

Awesome :') @xxsenpaixsamaxx

[kdee916]

Isn't that mao and hiro from taiyou no ie? :D

[inspireoscar]

Love hurts huh. Memories are the worst part

[red-rose]

hi
really and i am not joking at all - your writings are one of the best...
i adore you and i must learn from you
i write arabic and english poems but strong as you do

[strongnbold]

You write so beautifully.