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Casually walking down the street
Just striding around looking for a good seat
Ah yeah that's the one
Finally my favorite bench is in sight
I've had a couple things on my mind that kept me up last night
I love this place
It allows me to control my brains space
Wait hold up
Today it feels a bit different
The difference is quite abrupt
It's actually pretty warm
No longer cold from the winter's morn
I guess it's finally spring
I can finally start to swim
The waters still freezing
Maybe it'll stop my thoughts from bleeding
Now that's a funny thought
Maybe a Jacuzzi instead I should've bought
Anyway what's actually bothering me?
That person from yesterday
That crossed my path and blocked my way
I'm not sure what bothered me so much
I guess it's 'cause they had the audacity to touch
Their figure was kinda' short
They were dressed like they'd just come from court
The person grabbed me by the shoulder
I swear I'm like 2 years older
They spun me around to face them
But all I could see was smudged
Tears fell, a new harbored grudge
How can I help you? I asked
The person broke down
I felt really awkward
I didn't know this unusual frown
How can I contact them again
To see if I can help them
Through their troubles and pain
Well At the moment there's nothing I can do
Maybe I should get new shoes?
I still have a few things to do today
Let me start to get 'em out of my way
By Ethan
2017/09/09
Digno de admirar
i did not only enjoyed it ,, i loved it
nice ,,, really nice :)
Thank you :D
Bingo, good work
Although I'm not a English native speaker, I can say this.
"Poetry is the mother tongue of mankind"
Thank you for great content to enjoy :)
Neither is English mine, but I find it quite good at explaining
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Awesome post.
You're really nailing it.
Nice work. Very thought provoking!
Wow am beginning to fall in love with poetry, i must confess that am not a fan before but this is just impressive.
wow,what a nice poem..I've enjoy reading..Upvoted & resteem this post..
i have a 3 recent poems,hope you like it,take your time to read.hope you enjoy reading..your upvote is highly appreciate..
https://steemit.com/philippines/@leslyfay/poerty-4-the-butterfly-moth
https://steemit.com/poetry/@leslyfay/poetry-5-in-search-of
https://steemit.com/poetry/@leslyfay/poetry-3-i-will-love-you-anyways
I'm trying to figure out what it is about your poems that people seem to like, but my poems don't get as much attention. I don't have as many as you do and most of mine are not so good, but some of them I think are really good. Even better than the one you liked, "Buzzed", although I'll admit, that one is good too. I'm building my Voting Power back up, so no Upvote for now, but I'll get you with one of my big ones, but it's not so big yet, later.
Thank you :) I don't think my poems are that great.
ooh it's a mazing
thank you for sharing this with us
That feeling you get when you could have offered help but didn't, that reprimand by your mind for failing to help one who is feeling low like you know all too well. Maybe thats what they refer to as humanity.
Very true... humanity ey?
Yeah, Like Gandhi and all em guys said, humans want to show love more but the society is high on hate
What a wonderful poem Ethan. It actually had me intrigued by whether you will continue this story. I hope you do. You have such a gift that lightens up my day. That is a pretty powerful ability. I always look forward to your poems because they matter. Have a beautiful Sunday! .....Cabbagepatch!
hi cute poetry , Resteem :3
hy, @xxsenpaixsamaxx your poetry is do interesting..
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Very nice poem as usual. Great job dude! :)
Thanks, I'm glad to see your consistent comments :)
You're very welcome @xxsenpaixsamaxx. Your poems deserve it. ^^
I like writing poems as well, it would be really nice if you would check it out. I would love to hear your comment about it. :) Thank you very much! ^__^ https://steemit.com/philippines/@littlerph/you-can-do-it-poem
As always you did a good job writing again. :)
Here's my recent poem. Hope you have time to read. Comment, upvote & resteem would highly appreciated. THANKS! :)
https://steemit.com/philippines/@athenabree08/r-a-i-n-in-poetry#comments
I'll check it out :)
Very nice post! :) Upvoted, resteemed and followed!
Please follow to help other stemians promote their posts! Lots of thanks!
I prefer to have people drop me links, If i follow too many people then I don't see all the content
:D Thanks for dropping by ☺
Nice poem :)
@xxsenpaixsamaxx
I really enjoy evrytime i read ur post. So calming and wonderful.
Can't wait to read ur othe poetry.
Please visit me @Poetic-Power Thanks
Wow, your poems are good, as always. It's impressive, people like it a lot and each and every one of your poems has a lot of profit.
You look like a role model
Excuse my English, I'm Latin and well, I do what I can
Don't worry about English :D I'm natively Afrikaans, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
of course. I have already lost count of how many I have read
nice post you got there :) upvoted and resteemed by @jhanmervz
pls upvote and resteem my post i will highly appreciate it. thanks senpai !!!
https://steemit.com/philippines/@jhanmervz/its-never-easy
good work i like the simplicity of the words!!
but beautifully used as a tool of literature!!
o i have also poems about booze and moon check that u!!!
https://steemit.com/poem/@louielowa/wasted-s-poem
https://steemit.com/poetry/@louielowa/luna