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Dressing up I see
My reflection stares back at me
Why am I going through the trouble of looking neat
When all I'm really doing is going to greet?
It's nearly half past five
I better hop into my car and take a drive
Wall berry street again
It looks as though there might be some rain
Should I park a couple blocks down
So that I can take my afternoon run around?
The parking lot on fifth seems about right
I just need to park my car in securities sight
Now I can take a stretch
Warm my calves and jog past my usual bench
Six is meet up time
Whatever she is going to say's been on my mind
A quick spray of deodorant
A new change of clothes
A quick brush through my hair
With a fine toothed comb
I've got an umbrella just in case
The grey clouds have started to quicken their pace
There she is
Looking a little in distress
That frown doesn't suit you
Smile a bit it makes you more attractive
With that there was a slight flex in her cheek
She was looking way more distractive
Dressed in a form of casuals today
No court I presume?
Her face changed, She stepped in
I could smell her perfume
I asked if you could meet me here
I've been feeling a bit devoid of cheer
If you came to me to have fun
Let me tell you I'm so dun
I'm just done with my current situation
I need to change my frowny salutation
Is that really all you stopped me for?
My heart started sinking into the floor
Not quite
But I don't have the energy to tell you tonight
All things in due time
Keeping things to yourself isn't a crime
The first drop hit me
Funny enough it made it through all the leaves
We were standing under a massive oak tree
Mind if I put this up?
Pulling out my umbrella
I finally got a good glimpse of her
She looked interstellar
Why would she approach this strange fella?
By Ethan
2017/09/11
That was well written and structured. Great work @xxsenpaixsamaxx !
Part 4 please? I am hooked :D
thats so sweet... good poem with lovely feelings.... keep it up and thanks :)
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Amazing poem, I like poems so much. :)
That was a great poem.
But You made a mistake in the 4th line. It should be "great", right ?
Forgive me for that. I hope you didn't mind.
Sorry. :)
Eyyy XD I don't mind. When i read fast i also skip or misplace words :)
No matter.
Shit happens sometime :D
Keep up the good work !!
Excellent poem!!
hey amigo me gusto tu post ahora mismo acabo de hacerte un #resteem y te seguire...
Beautiful story
Good story bro. I resteemed it!
I like the part 3 like omg. Haha. Feels like I'm reading a romance book it's just that it's in a poetry version. Can't help but smile while reading the POV of the guy. Lol. I loved itttttt so much, promise, no joke. Will be waiting for part 4. :))
Edited: I have posted a new poem @xxsenpaixsamaxx. I hope you would have a time to visit and comment so I could improve my writing, I believe I could learn a bunch from you. ^^ https://steemit.com/poetry/@littlerph/it-s-over-poem
Thank you very much and do have a nice day! 😊😊
I'm gonna check it out right now :D I really appreciate your constant support :)
Thank you very much! :) It's because your poems are really nice. I like the narrative part of it and also the cliffhangers haha. Your poems are worth the constant support. ^^ They're all awesome. ;)
Thank you :D
You are very welcome. :)
A lot of thought and sweetness throughout , always displayed in your poetry that you worked hard :] always the romantic too :]
I missed reading them while I was ill away from steemit, glad I have stopped by before bedtime to read your writing...
you are a great role model to learn from too, with your continued success !
well done and thank you for sharing another love story of yours x
Thank you for checking out my stuff again :D I was wondering what happened... Hope you heal up and/or get well soon :D
wow its look like a animation :)
Waiting for the part 4 :-)
hermoso
It was worth it reading all of this awesome read!! thankyou for such great writings , also I have a story about unsung hero that you might like.
Please read and if you like do give upvote this is the motivation that keeps newbies like us keep growing thankyou so much! https://steemit.com/story/@haky-speaks/the-amazing-story-of-irena-sendler
Heart touching words, lovely poem!