Poem / Your Name

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Your Name

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Just a little longer
Just wait till we've made each other stronger
There's so much more left for us
Don't leave, Don't disappear in the dust

Just stay a while
You'll be here I'll make you smile
Tell me your name
I'll shout it to the world, bring you fame

Just a little bit more
You are the one I adore
Don't leave just yet
There's so much left unsaid

I feel as though I've met you
I feel as though we're connected
Let me find you somehow
I need you to head my ship's bow

Stay with me
Let's grow older than trees
Just enjoy each others company
For all eternity

Just let me be the surviva'
Kimi no na wa?

By Ethan
2017/08/09

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Good poem is very emotional

love it.. nice poetry i feel.

Nope. I don't want to leave you. Your poems have made me smile. I follow yours. I love them.. :)

Thanks bud :)


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Love it <3 haven't watch this anime yet, is it good ?

Go do yourself a favour, and watch it right now. It is a movie of about 2 hours in length and it is the best creation everrrrr!!!!!

This anime was such an emotional roller coaster to watch. I think you've captured the journey in this poem well. Good work.

Thanks bud, kimi no na wa was one of the best animes I have ever seen

it.s amazing

Just best Anime of 2017!

It's a must watch for everyone. Go watch it 💖

Couldn't agree more!!!

Captivating poem ! I read till the last word.

A nice poem,deep but in a calm way. I liked it :)

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That really was a very beautiful and hopeful poem of connecting to someone out there who is special. We all have beautiful people waiting for their paths to cross with us. We just need a "little longer". And time will bring new beginnings! :D

Very true, I'm patiently waiting and seeking :)

Just stay a while
You'll be here I'll make you smile
Tell me your name
I'll shout it to the world, bring you fame ........................What a beautiful work

Thanks bud L;

Good work, very emotive and creative!

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