I would really appreciate the criticism, I like to have a second opinion from an unbiased source, it gives me a better look at my work and helps me improve.
I will also be following you and looking at your writings as learning experience and trying to adjust where I can.
My spelling is also bad at the moment because I use a cellular device to produce my content, my fingers type too fast and mix things up and when I proof read I miss little details. I will definitely fine comb my work from now on :)
It will be a pleasure to do what I can - I presume you know how to edit your post. Try to let me know when you post (sometimes I don't look for a day or more because I'm busy writing and miss posts I want to read). I'll let you know what needs correcting, even if not spelling, and once you have decided what you want to correct and the poem is edited, I'll delete my suggestion. It is the only way I can keep it between the two of us.
Do you by any chance have either steemit chat or discord?
Chat: arthur.grafosff
Will only be on in 30 minutes