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in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

I feel the same way, today, @xxsenpaixsamaxx. Thank goodness, tomorrow is always a chance to start, again, and people who know us and really care will always understand...

Since you gave us permission to correct your typos, here are a couple that I caught (as an editor for over 20 years, I can't help spot these things...)

"despondent" is with an e
"today's" needs an apostrophe to show possession

Wishing you a restful night's sleep :)
Yahia

PS - Here is a poem of mine that I just posted, on the power of imagination, that you might enjoy:
https://steemit.com/poetry/@yahialababidi/the-night-and-its-bewitching-might-where-poets-dream-and-cry-original-poem

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Thank you for the corrections :) and for the uplifting message!

You're very welcome, dear Ethan @xxsenpaixsamaxx You're a poet of love, which also means of Hope. As I say in one of my books, If Love were not always a step ahead, how would it ensure we kept up the chase?

Have a wonderful week ahead!
Yahia

PS - Have you thought of using @dsound to record/read your poetry? Here's my 1st attempt :) https://steemit.com/dsound/@yahialababidi/the-night--its-bewitching-might--original-poetry-reading