here is mine :)
First Date on a late bowling night,
feelings of butterflies with every strike.
Sparks flying through the sky
which made both of us feel very shy.
Everything went way too good
until he said i love you way too soon!
Shock and horror came in like a raccoon,
as i quickly said good night and ran out of the room!
Seems like the first was also the worst. Great entry :)
It indeed was :D thank you for your kind words!
HAHAHA!!!! RUuuuuuuN!!!! Good work!
Thank you :) running as fast as the wind! :D
Dang that "I love you" ! lol great poem!
:D Thank you! I like yours too :)
I'd run too! Your poem is a powerful image. Thanks for your entry.
Most of us would run probably :D thank you so much!