Reflection longing [love poetry]

in #poetry7 years ago

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Walk alone
Without your presence on the side
And let me climb
This sad story of life

It will never be easy for me
overshadow the footsteps with your shadow
The story of my life is not perfect, without you

The light of longing emanates from your face
That seemed to be talking
Through the red hue of your lips
Though not a word

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Speak from heart to heart
My heart praised
Though your mind tests

a taste that is truly unworthy
Unspoken from our lips
Because we fill each other
And we are flowing, like water

Until it becomes a cloud that drops rain
That moistens, in every land of longing
To be no longer sad

And to be no more empty
Cleaning up sorrow
Brought wounds

wounded by longing
Love injury because of pain.

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Hhhe... Its really too good poetry in my heart.