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RE: Moro Rock, Sequoia National Park: 2013

in #poetry7 years ago

I love the rhythm this piece has, I feel like I am following you up the rock face. I also love how the poem starts with the heavy, hot breath of man and ends with the hushed and silent waters...such great build! I so sense that you write for yourself...I feel your spirit in your words