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RE: Find me in my land/Original poem [100 Days poetry challenge (Day 76)]

in #poetry6 years ago

Throughout the poem, anguish moves in an endless desert. The tone is pitiful, painful, abysmal. The trimming of words is the same feeling that there is no solution to evil in the short term, it is like a labyrinth with no way out. Good job, brother!