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RE: Another Day (Day 100 of 100) @d-pend

in #poetry7 years ago

Delicate thread that builds a small magic carpet that slides by a gentle farewell with slopes. it's more like "see you later". Totally beautiful! I love, a lot, these lines:

it is to look upon,
a parting glance

a twist on a strand,
a turn in the road

Excellent work, @mamadini. It was a pleasure reading.

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Thank you for these lovely words of kindness. I look forward to digging deeper into your work now that there is a little more free time for such things in my life -- the beauty of poetic words has always moved me and people that allow the energy to flow. <3