I like the way you're thinking. Just so you know, the poem is not based on the picture; I just pulled an appropriate picture from the Internet. I am not going to explain the exact meaning of the poem's message, that is for the reader to ponder.
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I assumed it was about the picture as it was posted together.
"I am not going to explain the exact meaning of the poem's message, that is for the reader to ponder."
Providing evidence, context, and images to illustrate your point makes your poem better.
Avoid the abstract and obscure. It is confusing and forgettable.
Thanks! I hope to see the refinement.