Hello.
Your poem touched me, really! Maybe it's not saturated with metaphors and other play of words, but it does convey feelings! In fact, it is very difficult to choose, because any choice is just my subjective opinion... but really great poems more and more!
Inspiring!
I believe Feelings are what poetry is all about. But not just the basic feelings like; anger, love, happy, sad, hot or cold. I think its all the feelings, all senses that can be.
side note: Even though the logo on steemit has changed the logo for Steem is still the same so your logo is just as Great.