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RE: PoetryDice #31 entry - Poem 'Breathe'

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Fujoshi

The twilight of the rotten apple,
Self mocking,
Inwardly shocking,
In a dominated patriarchacy,
What thoughts set you free,
When you search for intimacy,
Woman in the man,
Can you see it,
Can you find it,
Do women grasp its hidden hand,
Or is this cultural spirituality,
Hide, see me if you can?

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Fugoshi??? It should have been Fujoshi.. hihihi~
but WOW... I'm loving this piece... ^^

Sorry, there must be two spellings online, I had to look it up to understand what it meant - corrected - glad you liked it :-)

No worries.. but yeah.. I really like the poem you made.. <3

Thank you ;o) But that sort of completes the reason it was written - as a response to you saying if one person feels enhanced, write another one ;o)