aesthetically, your poem is definitely inviting - creating a coherent shape that defines the start and end is always cool to see, and difficult to execute, good to see it here, @moeknows.
this is an interesting concept, creating within the confines of the imagery you've shown above, and you executed well; spinning a nostalgic, coming of age narrative. warming and pleasant.
well writ, Moe; can't believe you were going to further limit yourself with Fibonacci sequencing, especially with all the limitations already in place. Honestly, impressive as is.
Thank you for sharing.
Thank you! I'm sorry for not replying when you made the comment. Yeah, the fibonacci was a bit too ambitious, but I may try it a a later time with syllables. I still couldn't see it going more than 7 lines though. Thank you for commenting, I do appreciate it.