Overall I really like this. I think you incorporated each piece well. Something about "witch doctor" throws off the flow of the poem when I read it.
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Overall I really like this. I think you incorporated each piece well. Something about "witch doctor" throws off the flow of the poem when I read it.
Thanks. Yeah, I probably forced this one a little too much. Sorry I didn't reply sooner.
No worries!