Adventures
The apple of my eye,
You intoxicate my senses.
And open up my mind.
Let's fly to the moon together
Leave our problems on the ground
And then free fall through the sky
Back home without a sound.
Wrap me up in cotton wool
Be my overarching shelter
As we hurtle round each corner
On life's endless helter skelter.
We can dive below the surface
Of the oceans wide and deep
And swim amongst the fish
Living on the reef.
Be my best bud forever
Let us never be apart.
What would be the point of life
Without you in my heart.
PDC3K is the Best poetry competion on Steemit and hosted by the hugely talented @robyneggs and @rensoul17.
This is an original poem by @g-force1980. All feedback, positive or negative, is welcome.
A pleasant feeling indeed. You have created a romantic feel. The dice speak. Thank you so much for your participation and appreciation @g-force1980! Wishing you a wonderdul day...
As I've said before thank you @robyneggs for hosting the contest. I have rediscovered my love of poetry through Steemit and the poetry dice are a great enabler of imagery and creativity.
You had me at, the pic (which i truly love and the very first line. I love this @g-force, you took me so many place.
Thank you @rensoul17. I very much appreciate your kind comments.
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I like it. A good one; easy to understand and u catch the feeling also.
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