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RE: Poetry Dice 23 Entry: Remembering the Future

in #poetrydice7 years ago

Thanks for your comment. Sorry for just now getting to it. I went back and forth with a lot of different words for chatting as I felt the word was kind of cheap, but ultimately I felt that it best portrayed what I was trying to convey. I'm sure there's another word out there, but didn't feel like putting in the effort to research it.

You're right about the ending. I didn't intend for the piece to take on any shape, but my original plan would have had me beginning and ending with a Fibonacci sequence so I finished that way for the final four lines.

Thanks again for your comment.

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Don't mention taking time. I have tabs open for a month now, that I need to get to. It is how it is.