You almost scared me there bro lol I was pretty certain the challenge just started today. I actually missed the second poetry slam challenge unfortunately but I'm back in the race for this one. And yes I actually just reworded that line I'm sure you were referring to. I like this rhythm much better, it bothered me lol Thanks for reading my work and showing support and dropping a comment. Much appreciated, I'm happy you could find a set of favourite lines. You should definitely enter the challenge as well.
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Heh My mind blanks out things when I read them for some odd reason, and I'll also see word orders reversed at times. Woops. :D
The flow works a lot better now. ;) I plan on entering, if I can remember to do it lol
It's all good, I'll be sure to remind you for this one. I'm sure you will have a great entry piece. Make sure to follow the rules exactly. My last entry didn't follow the theme so I didn't place at all.