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RE: EFFORT

in #poetrywriting7 years ago (edited)

Amazing thoughts my dear... Just what i discussing with sister this evening when she asked why i have not proposed to her yet... And am like wow...not soon dear.

I wish i had seen this post earlier so i would tell her in your words

It kinda seems like I'm forcing myself on her,
It seems I'm the only one holding on to a friendship that refuses to be held onto,
It feels I'm the only one making effort and try to keep the friendship alive.

Keep this poetic juice flowing dear

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Really... I'm so happy that my writing actually helped you... Cheers if she deserves u certainly you will know through her actions and not words..