SPU Poetry Contest #1: Lost

in #poetsunited7 years ago (edited)

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Quote 2: Was the One that Inspired me. Thank you @lymepoet you have been great.

if I only had a match to light
and see where I am now
wrong side of heaven
or righteous
depth of
hell?

Taken from the poem LOST, by @lymepoet.


Lost in the darkness within
Soon to find what is wrong
Have I committed a sin
For being truthful and strong

Will I find what I seek
Will you help me today
Or I have been at my peak
I had long went off my way

It is a matter of time
To see how all will unfold
I have to give the same line
The truth has to be told

Lost but yet found
Things can change in an instant
Sometimes you are just bound
Sometimes I am resistant

I try my best every day
And still I feel no satisfaction
It is not easy they say
To make the right action

By Angel Veselinov

Written For Poets United Contest... :) I might not qualify but just for the fun of it ... :) God Bless You All . Peace and Love.

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Wow! Great ... This piece progresses well as i read down!
There are so many good writer in #poetsunited.
I feel intimidated...loL!
Maybe i should write a poem about this feeling!
Nice piece @angelveselinov

Thanks darling. It is nice to see you being active in the community. It is a pleasure to have you and all other great poets. I think we are making some noise now. And soon to be well established group on Steemit. :) We just need time and dedication and all will come eventually :) God Bless You. Peace and Love.

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TY :) I am happy to be A Wizard now :)

Thank you for participating ;) I enjoyed this more than your usual poetry. It has more depth! I like it.

The first stanza is definitely strong, there is a sort of unexplainable emotion to it.

wow :P I knew we have to make a contest so I will at least earn honorable mention hahahha

how can we share the link in this contest?

I am not sure that I understand what you mean...

Have I committed a sin
For being truthful and strong

No, you've not, you've only proven strong where strength is a luxury that cannot be afforded

Yes may be you're right but sometimes showing strength when not needed you can be on the wrong side of the coin no matter you think what you're doing is right ...

Yeah yeah yeah....u r very right!