I love how the poem ended - "Choose to love and freely give". I see a lot of potential in your writing, although, I do feel like some lines were led by rhyme and lost their meaning along the way.
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I love how the poem ended - "Choose to love and freely give". I see a lot of potential in your writing, although, I do feel like some lines were led by rhyme and lost their meaning along the way.
really?
gimme the lines, so I'll help clarify you ....
Thanks for reading sire
sure.
Both of these instances. The last line throws me off from what is being said. I am open to hearing your explanation/clarification. Thank you :)