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RE: The Nature I Love

in #poetsunited7 years ago

i can genuinely say i like this piece. in the first and second stanza, i actually smiled because of your use of imagery and it actually calmed me down which i am guessing was your intent for those two stanzas. the rest i liked and i feel like it is a compilation of thoughts you had which rhymed with the idea (love for nature) you were going for. regardless, not bad at all dear. keep it all the way up.

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