From a spark, a vast reaction
Attraction, between objects in space
Retrace the movements on your palm
Calm again, the universe sings
Brings a tear to every eye
High above the earth, you gazed
Amazed at all that you had made
Laid down in the night, a wondrous
Thunderous voice cried out
About the time you gave them breath
Death comes swiftly for them all
Fall then winter, life has perished
Cherished each day, a single seed grows
Glows tenderly in the moonlit night
Delight propagates a sea of trees
Decrees spread its love; forests wake
Remake the world, and into its embrace, succumb.
(From a spark, a vast reaction…)
This is an entry for @droucil's poetry contest. If you enjoyed this poem and would like to see more contests supporting the creation of this kind of work, be sure to give him a follow and check out #poetwisdom.
Love the unique scheme with the front-loaded rhymes.
Nice job.
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Thank you! It's probably my favorite scheme for writing poems, though I don't see it used very much. Enjoy a randowhale upvote!
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