Really ? Do you think your English is good ?
First, letter in the beginning of the paragraph have to be big, in yours it's little. lol
Second, you have a lot of commas, you need points instead.
Third, you need a point in the end of the paragraph.
Fourth, we have to write English always with capital letter.
So whose English is better now ? Mine or yours ? lol ))))) :) :) 😆