Really good location and light. Composition is the weakest link. It might be also personal preference but I think the subject (face) is better placed off centre. Also the partially visible leg of the model is distracting. Hope you don't mind some quick photoshopping:
Thanks for posting and keep on shooting!
Really good location and light. Composition is the weakest link. It might be also personal preference but I think the subject (face) is better placed off centre. Also the partially visible leg of the model is distracting. Hope you don't mind some quick photoshopping:

Thanks for posting and keep on shooting!
Not at all. In fact that cut leg is really distracting. Thanks for help :)