Hi @bal-cheng. There are a few things I would like to point out:
- You didn't cite your article references
- Your image citation seems weird and in my honest opinion is wrong. You need to provide certain information to make it proper. Please refer here if you're not familiar with I was talking about.
- Consider putting some more images to make it much more interesting. Your article is quite lengthy so to make it entertaining, add some more pictures.
Please note that I'm not in any way, try to disapprove your work. You've done an excellent job here, but you can make it better. If you have any problem regarding STEM-related articles, you can join steemSTEM Discord Channel and we will be glad to assist you.
Update:
Hi @bal-cheng. This article is copy pasted from:
Unless the original article is yours, this is an act of plagiarism. This action would not and should not be tolerated.
it's not an article plagiarism, friend